So, just started writing this one. Been working on it for about 20 mins now, and I need to go to sleep. It is 5:11 am and I actually have work to do tomorrow! Its not done, and tomorrow or Wednesday are the goals to have a finished draft. It rhymes, and I have a idea of where I want to take it, but I'm just too tired:
Out in the waves t'was a whale, you see
a bumpy old whale who was singing to me.
I spoke to the whale, the snail of a thing,
"Oh, Mr. Whale, I love how you sing!"
He rose to the surface and broke through the waves,
blew salt out his nose, and whipped up a haze.
I touched on his bumps as he whistled his song,
but deep in his eyes I saw something was wrong.
"Oh, Mr. Whale, have you something to say?"
But still those sad lenses gazed out in dismay.
He slipped slowly down to the water, into the foam
but I could still partake of his glorious psalm.
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I love that! That's so awesome!
ReplyDeleteI wish I could write poetry like you.
By the way, ask and you shall receive. xD -just posted a blog-
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